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incredible work. i love stories where i get a sense of the POV character's true thoughts about the people they surround themselves with and honeydew complex executes this very well. 

great use of the three-act structure, as it escalates in its brutality and reveals callie's true nature. going to think about the final text scene between her and aila forever.

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Wow that kept going and escalting further. I thought seeing her room mate was a big shock but the paths leading forward made me hit a wall even harder each time.

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I wasnt expecting to leave a comment here but DAMN, this was incredible. Thank you for making the best game that is LITERALLY impossible to recommend "no no guys its not weird kink shit, I mean it is? but its not written in a way for you to enjoy it, its like, character focused and shit and an interesting narrative about a DEEPLY fucked up woman" 

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Reading this was a blast. I love the way the GUI is used. It was very creative, and the storytelling was compelling and gut-wrenching. It was a very fun read! 

I love the usage of the cursor changing whenever a scene comes up to show Callie's state of mind and actions. It was really a unique design choice that a lot of the other comments have mentioned. I wonder if the designs were really intentional, to say the least.

Overall, a fun piece of work with cute girls  <3

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Utterly amazing work, I think it will stick in my head for a long long time forming a sooty mold and attracting unwanted pests.

This is just so well executed on every level, like others have said there are just so many beautiful little details that really show just an insane amount of polish and consideration for the project. You can literally flick the phone screen with your mouse and it will slide realistically like what in the actual fuck (positive)

The art is SO gorgeous the character designs and expressions the color palette and mixed media UI, the quality just speaks for itself. (shout-out to that special blinking animation for [redacted] so friggin adorable)

The sfx were so delicious and the music tracks were all bangers lulling me into a type of hypnotic frenzy that matched the tone perfectly.

The story is so wild and fun and surprising and titillating and disgusting I loved it.

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Oh my god this is so good, you simply must play it.

A really beautiful artistic vision executed upon so well, a soundscape that wraps its hand around your whole body and squeezes (complimentary), and a story aimed directly at the center of my technically beating, lukewarm heart. 

Arthropod VN solidarity. 

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LOVED THIS... VERY MUCH!!! what a really nice tapestry... i think the sort of maximalist design fits the game's atmosphere super well, as we sink into callie's world. and it was so finely tuned holy cow! i loved all the little details like being able to scroll in the phone, the sort of hover parallax effect with the bg, the loads of perfect and delicious expressions, callie tightening that yarn around her finger during the text convo w aila early on, the cursor changes... dude like i could go on forever. the cursor change was particularly ero in how it in a really small but effective way involved the player. i was also so gagged at the ending, so well timed... but all in a super compelling snapshot of a very cute girl stumbling very hard as she connects some dots. LOVE! also the playlist is genius (kai please put this on bandcamp...)